Comments : A Galactic Vision

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    It is not difficult to see the images your words bring us. Sometimes I am so taken with them, that I overlook the message of the poem and have to reread and that is not a bad thing.

  • 14 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    Thank you for your kind words, Sylvia! Wrote this one after a walk under the stars some months ago.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Randy
    You spin your words like a painter spins his colors on his brush. Awesome imagery and word choices allow your readers to see what you have invisioned in your words.

    Gazing at seas of lifetimes that climb the latticework of galaxies,
    Spreading beyond the limits of the mind's boundaries
    To sapphire bridges uniting all beings in the crucible of Life,
    Beyond all limits,
    Beyond all knowledge

    ^^^^^^
    Makes me look forward to crossing that bridge.
    Excellent job!
    *hugs
    Cindy