Comments : Excuse her

  • 13 years ago

    by Deana

    A very real truth here! Youth leads us in unsure directions, but you are so right, it needs to be excused because maturity will come in time! nice write Yaki!

  • 13 years ago

    by Fear2love

    Damn good poem :p
    this was my fav. part:
    "Excuse her,
    She doesn't know what she wants
    To terrified,to unsure
    Do not shove ideologies down her throat.."
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Though very skillfully written this poem has a very cute way of expressing deep feelings