Put on my favorite dress
Legs below strong and bare
Wandering streets of this town
No longer drawing stares

Though these just may look like 4 lines but i know the history of sadness behind it.
No matter after how many days/months you write, magic of expressing sadness/emotions will remain forever. Great write.
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all the best and take care

Aww Cindy... that is such a touching write... sometimes i too feel that time is running out... heartfelt imageries you have painted here. beautiful write

I am reading this poem of yours and loving it everytime, thank you for posting/sharing.

Cindy you finally posted this. It reeks of sadness and hopelessness and dreams of how things once were.

You are a beautiful woman, inside & out. Don't let anyone tell you differently. A great poem, I think the only people who truly can appreciate this poem and understand the depths of your emotions are your friends and those whom have stood beside you through everything. A truly sad poem that touches my heart very deeply. The wording was perfect.

This piece has such a subtle intensity behind it... and the emotion..!! Just amazing.
This piece is so beautiful.. I could not possibly choose a single line or verse in which was a favourite. Sensational!!
5/5

This really touched my emotions

The sadness and hopelessness withi this write really finds a way to the reader's heart and grabs it with pain..a touching write Cindy..take care.

This is one of the most unique, moving poems that I have passed by these days..

the wording was such descriptive and i felt like i was walking beside you.
sharing your feelings..feeling your emotions and being touched by the word choice.

the title took me right away..and oh how i can relate to many..many..many points. Through the weakness in this poem only shows me how BRAVE you are. that you are FACING it.

the hopelessness I felt only showed me the FAITH you have. that you are sharing it.

i am moved, I am touched, and I have added this to my verrryyyy favorite poems.

I love itttt..oh i love you!

5/5
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we will discuss this piece ^_^

Excellently penned cindy!

Really well written and very emotional in parts. I think many people will relate to this as we are all on borrowed time in one way or another

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