In the wake of long shadows
rose the moon, beside shreds of
-dreamless stars-

Now this is creative, the choice of words wrapped in amazing imagination...just beautiful.

all the best and take care

Your choice of words is very good and the descriptions in this piece are very nice giving the reader something to visualize while he/she reads the poem. I also like the stanza format as it was short but it flowed very good and made it easy to read through. The only thing I regret in this poem is the shortness of it. Still I believe you have done a wonderful job with what you have already written. Great job and keep writing.

Raj
Great job on this piece.
Wonderful imagery and word choices. Very sad emmotions contained in your words.
Love Cindy

I like the way you wrote this poem, the flow
of sentences and the ending with a single word..your choice of words captures the heart. Very nicely done!