by Sylvia
How appropriate for most of the club members, snowflakes and I am sure that most of them would agree with your words, I do. I just don't miss them (smiles). |
by Jad
I really like this form and you seem to have done a descent job with it. I haven't checked to see if you did it right but it looked right from what I could see off the top of my head. Anyway the rhyming was actually somewhat descent and wasn't forced or anything which really helped the flow of your poem, which I thought was really good. The description of the snow is wonderful and it instills the image of snow falling and a changing of all the terrain. |
by Cindy
Olwin |
This is so pretty, very nicely penned. I love snow and i love everything abt & your choice of words has just created a beautiful image in my mind, thanks for posting this poem. |
by Meena Krish
My, my..I like this form and more so what you have done with it! It unfolds so smoothly with soft images for the mind..excellent write! |
Well done nice flow and image. |