"Exited for the prospect"

^I assume this is supposed to be "excited"

Overall I thought you did a great job here and were creative with describing a circumstance that many of us come to find ourselves in, in many aspects of our lives. A nice read, good work.

This is this most clever acrostic like poem I have ever read

I love this poem. It is not an acrostic though, simply an original way of presenting the message you have. Nice.

I just love how you craft your poems together Randy! :) You have a style that is all your own... and it is superb. I love how you draw the reader in from the start with what is is you're saying.... and ALWAYS love the endings to your poems. You write what people can relate to, and I like that!

Also you write with such brilliant rhyme & rhythm :)) ...

Keep penning =]

This was awesome all the way through. i liked how you put that, holding out, and spelling it out like that, another great read