by Krista
I can relate to this poem............. |
Hey Krista, thanks for your comment. |
Its a sad thing to happen to someone, this kind of experience, real sad. Most ppl get blinded by the truth when it comes to love until the time comes when the lie becomes too obvious. Anyways, this ones kinda an old poem of yours so Im hoping the pain healed away. About the poem, I like it, being straightforward (without being boring) and the lenght of each line, doesnt bring you to a stop until the end. Real good. |
Thanks for taking the time to read it |
Good poem, lots of raw emotion that readers can relate to. 5/5 |