This truly is heartbreaking. It brought tears to my eyes. You captured so much emotion in this. Very touching... 5/5

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This is so powerful and moving, it really truly touched me in my heart and they way you have worded every single line is just beautiful. They flow so easily and link onto the next without flaw.

This comforted me in a way because I also believe this, and i know that if I did not hold onto this image and belief I would not cope as well with missing the people i have lost. I have many shining stars and I thank you for writing this to remind me of them.

A truly amazing poem, which has a very good title, I like how you claim the sky and explain why it is your sky in your poem. 5/5