by A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA Dec 16, 2010
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Days could never end when you were around, |
Thanks again! Appreciate it. (: |
So sad. it flowed beautifully; and i love the imagery of the weather changing as the happiness did. great poem 5/5 |
Thanks heaps. Appreciate it. |
Girl, this is good, really good to be exact. I love the way you made this piece from oh so lovely the first half then everything turned black the next. I wish it was the other way around but it was really awesome notheless. This poem, for sure Ill remember this for a very long time. Great. |
Thanks Ingrid!! |