This is a very interesting read! You nicely summed up a life without happiness. Keep it up!

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Such a sad poem, Alisha. You made it rhyme beautifully, though:)

I could feel what you mean in every word you wrote, how happiness can be taken from you from one moment to the other and leave you gasping for air. I can tell you: it never gets easier, heartbreak will always cause deep wounds, no matter the age you are.

Welcome back, sweetheart:)

5/5 Ingrid

Thanks Ingrid!!
Much appreciated.

Girl, this is good, really good to be exact. I love the way you made this piece from oh so lovely the first half then everything turned black the next. I wish it was the other way around but it was really awesome notheless. This poem, for sure Ill remember this for a very long time. Great.

Thanks heaps. Appreciate it.

So sad. it flowed beautifully; and i love the imagery of the weather changing as the happiness did. great poem 5/5

Thanks again! Appreciate it. (: