I have came across your poems and so far i red three of them and i can say that, you are very creative. This poem is mind blogging, as i read, i think and i could only agree with all that you said. Keep on writing 5/5, kel.

"This something is all that it seems; small,
but withholds what I cannot withstand, and
is as powerful as a realistic dream."

Really amazing piece. I have nothing else to say.. 5/5

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