Comments : I Can't Stay.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Breathtaking lines~

    My past holds me back,
    I can't let you love me.
    I just cannot take your love.

    I love you. Honest, i do.
    And i know it sounds Cold now.
    But i'm doing this for you.
    I'm letting you go.

    I Love you.
    But if i stay,
    I'd bring you pain.
    I'm sorry.

    I Can't Stay.

    Great job! It's more than 5!

  • 12 years ago

    by Britt

    I feel like we often have to do something for the good even if it doesn't feel right. Sometimes we have to walk away and hurt the person in order for them to realize we didn't cause the pain we could have. I don't think my ramble makes sense, I hope you understand lol.

    This poem felt like a definite release. :) Well done