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I relate to this poem so much. The feeling I got from this poem is that your moods are always up and down.Maybe bipolar? You have been hurt but you also want to keep going to prove everyone wrong. The only thing I didn't like are the lines. They seem a bit choppy and don't flow great. I think punctuation. Short poems are very hard to write because you have to make an impact. You did well to express yourself but if you change it up a bit it will be really good! 5/5