Ron
What a great piece.

Like a blanket knitted
by grandmas two hands,
made of wool, white as the snow.

On my shoulders it rests
like a shelter from fright,
it covers and keeps me in tow

These 2 stanzas really are very touching. How nice it is to have somethng in our mind that shelters us.

Excellent job!

I love your writing Ron.. It always touches my heart. This poem did. Loved the image you created with your words.. that of a blanket knitted by Grandma's hands to speak of shelter and protection. Wonderful :) Keep penning dear friend! An excellent job indeed :))

A interesting poem that I found to be very heart filled. You seemed to have poured your heart into this piece. I like the stanza structure you use as it makes it flow better and with that the flow overall was really good and the message of the poem was nice as well. In all, I like the many topics you go to in this poem and also the emotions in this poem. Great job and keel writing.