Exactualy what I thought you would write.
the flow and the rhyming kelp it singing right
to the end and then left the reader wanting
more. You have a unquie writting style and
you should never stop writting. if this site
was as active as the old days this poem would have burn up the charts.I'M putting it
up as the best explcit poem of the week
you def. should be the poem of the week
but explicit never get picked thats why I Stop
nominated them.anyway I was hoping you
would put something new up.thanks

The rhyming made it smooth to read, slipping word to word, it was great.

Okk...so... I love this b/c its truth...and when someone can relate...it means more. 5/5.