Fallen

by Krista   Dec 21, 2010


You held me to reality
A string, dangling me above
And when that string was snipped,
I was alone, and you were gone
Im holding on, but Im lost
A wanderer, without purpose
You were my only reason to persist on
Ive fallen.

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  • 13 years ago

    by A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA

    Another really good poem.

    Just one thing...
    In the line:

    "You were my only reason to persist on"

    I don't think you really need the 'on' at the end.. it just seems out of place and a little cluttered.
    Other than, everything was great.

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