Yours words always give the reader vivid images to take with them as well as the message you deliver.

Randy
Once again your pen has worked it's magic. What a beautiful piece. Your imagery and word choices are awesome!
Excellent job!
~Clapping~
Love Cindy

Thank you, ladies! This one was inspired by a walk I took at one of my favorite Florida parks; Botanical Park in Plantation. Such an idyllic place fillled with lots of palm trees and tropical plants.

Poetry Goddess
This is one of the most magnificent rhyming poems; that I have ever read in my life.
Your lines drew some of the most magical images in my head; and I announce you indeed the God of rhythm.

I am influenced by this poem; which i will add to my favorite along with the poet.

I wish you best of luck for the weekly contest; I hope to see this on the front page.. because it is no bet; a front page worthy.

In the depths of azure of my mystical dream
The warm summer winds that pull me downstream

^^^this is very refreshing; gave me such a positive feelings; and fresh air.
Amazing flow..so far.

On a river of gold that runs through my mind
Past billowing curtains of tropical vines
^^
how magnificent? what a very pleasant view.
I am touched by the richness and happiness and quality of these lines.

To a verdant green garden that captures my eye
^^Although I believe that verdant garden is enough rather than verdant green..but the image that I got was as fair as beautiful.
Well done.

Neath the circling dance of the birds in the sky
My poetry goddess, she waits for me there
So graceful in form with a beauty so rare
^^

Like heaven :)..I love how you show her elegance; and your admiration for your poetry goddess ..Very likable and very unique.

She's calling me back with a warm serenade
From heavenly meadows of blossoming jade

^^you did not have to force one single word yet..the rhyme is terrifically excellent. I feel jealous. :P but honored.

In the depths of azure of my mystical dream
And the warm summer winds that pull me downstream.

^^I ;loved the repetition of these lines; kind of worked well especially that it enfolds some of my favorite word choice.

great job 5/5

Congratulation on your win dear. This is so beautifully written. This piece takes the reader to places :)

all the best and take care

Randy
Congrats....I knew it was a winner when i saw this piece :) Awesome job!
~Bravo~Bravo~Bravo~
~hugs~
Cindy

This is really an interesting piece of poetry... I like your style and descriptions. Also on another level I kind of feel as a poet I connect with the words; for writers are deep thinkers and kind of have a need for the one who either is a walking example of their poetic descriptions or can bond with them through words...It is really great 5/5

Short, sweet, alluring and beautifu!!! I liked this write with such lovely images for the mind to see...congrats on the win!!!

Hi Randy:)

I didn't get round to it yet, but wanted to tell you this poem is really good! Congrats on the win.

Have an awesome New Year my friend!

Hugs and a kiss

5/5 Ingrid

Pure magic!

I cannot but praise your work, and wish mine will someday come close to your perfection.

I've found myself a new favorite!