Carry Me Away

by RadianceInReverse   Dec 21, 2010


I swing my life away on the music
that frees my soul
it takes me to a place
that no one else can see
no one can understand
the language my mind creates
when the world fades to black,
all I have is the melody to keep
the light shining in my heart

I listen to the wind blow
and through the leaves a melodic angel
gives me the wings to float among
the mystical trees
my body molds into the earth,
I cannot see myself from this deep down

I melt away as the music takes my
weakened soul from this strange place
I fade into my own little world
molding with the words as they
carry me away....

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  • 13 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Another great one

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Amazingly catchy. A poem that's worth a 100 read.
    Great wording, admirable word choice.
    you need to add some commas, capitalize the (i)s
    and take off some (ands) but if you think it's needless then COOL. For I am in love with the poem whether you change these or keep them.
    I would like to see it on the front page..so I wish you good luck.

    a very creative piece, harmonic ..i was taken by your words and lines. and i was wanting to Relate and actually I did relate..

    a very clever poem
    5/5 d