Comments : Poisen

  • 13 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This makes me think of lyrics to a song that nails the frustration most of us have with romance

    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    I loved how you let ur emotions flow in this poem,goodwork

  • 13 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I really liked it. But you should capitalize your I's.
    Other then that it was good.

    5/5