Nik
This poem is so full of dispair and sadness. So much lonliness crys from your words. Great imagery and word choices.

Forgotten..I no longer exist
in this life anymore. My soul
has been sucked out
through a frosted straw
by the evil held by my
own demons. The sun has
met dawn and she has ended me...

Now everyone knows why
the mountain tops bleed
red--

I love your ending. You did an excellent job!
Love Cindy

Nik, this one is really sad...spl this stanza somewhat scared me

My soul
has been sucked out
through a frosted straw
by the evil held by my
own demons.

Great choice of words here, even the thought is mindblowing.
Great write

all the best and take care

Forgotten..I no longer exist
in this life anymore. My soul
has been sucked out
through a frosted straw
by the evil held by my
own demons. The sun has
met dawn and she has ended me...

What an image you have drawn here with words..very moving!

Now everyone knows why
the mountain tops bleed
red--

This is so touching with a strong note of sadness..well written.