Im sucked in

by Writtenpain   Dec 24, 2010


I'm losing control
the sound of ones
voice hits me like bricks
the words seeks through my skin
like rain drops soaking through my pores
the smile spreads across ones face
is like sun rays beating down on my head
the aura around the situation
is like a rainbow wrapped around me

I'm Sucked In

Ones heart is like the night sky
the beats pop out like stars within the darkness
blood running through my veins
like cars on a highway going a 100 miles per hour
my feelings are growing like sprouting seeds
my skin crawl like ants marching
my fingertips tingles as if love
is flying through them like the wind
the soles of my feet is leading me
into into the soul of ones life
and once again

I'm Sucked In

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  • 13 years ago

    by DeafBeats

    This is actually really good but they way you've arranged your sentences makes it really hard to read ...

    love your choice of words :)