great poem, I didnt really feel the flow or couldnt find what line I was on (felt like a story sometimes) but the message was there clear and was pretty nice, I can kinda relate cuz I lost a loved one too just a week ago and ya, you know why you lost your loved one, Im strill tryin to figure out what happened, guess I will in 30 days when she comes back from her vacation *sigh*

great poem, brings back memories for me and ya, dont wanna write an essay here, keep up the great work