I found this poem to be a different take on a loving poem but still found it to deliver the same message. I really like the emotions in this piece. They stand out strong and are deep in love and romance. Same thing but still thought I would say it. The poem itself had a good flow and the wording was as good as ever. Couldn't find one part that stood out to me. I think the entire poem stood out to me.

I want babble forever but I will say that this is a wonderful poem with a touch of sensuality. Great job and keep writing.

Temps
This is a beautiful passion filled piece. The word choices and imagery are great. You can feel the intoxicating effect she has on him as he is entranced by her perfume and touch.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

This was cute. I see that your latest poems have been in this format, I like it. Nice word choice, added a whimsical feel. :)