Every night i never go to bed until i read a poem that satiate my thirst, and for tonight your poem was the first and last. i can go to bed now. thank u for saving my time.
these 4 lines
Let it rain till every drop of my pain is washed away
Till the thunder deafens the beating of my heart
Until the lightning blinds the yearning in my eyes
Let it rain till I'm drowned in my obsession
gave me goosebumps. the flow is perfect. and the ending is superb.. i loved it...