Nice work with the form. I would loved to have seen these lines expanded on in a regular form to develop the images and emotions more although you did a good job with the limited words you could use.

Simple, Short, Deep & so Creative. Very nicely written.

If you notice again, all stanzas are shaped like christmas trees too... :)

Great write

all the best and take care

Absolutely beautiful Lanturnes :)
loved the vivid imagery in each of them :D
delighful read :D

Meena
I love the Lanturnes and how each one lights up the night.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

Wonderfully Penned Meena, Excellent job on this Lanturnes, Bravo!!!

Very discriptive and well worded

I enjoyed this read a lot

excellently penned

5/5

Amazing, just b-e-a-utiful!!!!!! another 5/5 indeed, keep it up, i think u may have a fan

So romantic, a blend of nature with love, it bewitches the reader's imagination.