Alone I Break

by Philip   Dec 29, 2010


No one hears
My silent cries
Deep inside I feel
The pressure of the world outside
Lost in the shadows
In this desolate place
Nothing to hold on
Nothing to embrace
I hear my mind
I hear it screaming
Feeling I can't go nowhere
In this world without leaving
I'm left alone to face myself
Drowning in my own misery
Soon this life will be erased
Soon there won't be anything left of me

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  • 13 years ago

    by Matthew Schut

    Great poem! Nicely written! I can tell that it was a deep feeling but I feel like there was still more that you needed to let out!! Keep up the good work! :)

  • 13 years ago

    by No1ButMe

    I really liked the first four lines they were really deep and a great opening. You're right our work is similar but if I've learned anything the depression isn't permanent. Stay strong and if you need to talk I have a set of ears. 5/5 Hope to read more by you.

    Svandyke

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