I really liked the first four lines they were really deep and a great opening. You're right our work is similar but if I've learned anything the depression isn't permanent. Stay strong and if you need to talk I have a set of ears. 5/5 Hope to read more by you.

Svandyke

Great poem! Nicely written! I can tell that it was a deep feeling but I feel like there was still more that you needed to let out!! Keep up the good work! :)