Nothing

by Fear2love   Dec 29, 2010


Silence is the foe
only crushes the mind
blinding those warm memories
going in circles
running laps around
the same painful memories
nothing is all i found
nothing is all i dream
love is a belief
and finding answers gets you lost
because the questions have no meaning at all
nothing to live for
but still no reason to die
the white light is the only cure
my soul will pass by
like I never was;
Nothing

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  • 10 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    I think we all have a moment or two in life where we feel like "nothing". We go to a dark place inside ourselves where we feel like nothing, nothing at all matters and you just feel completely lost. You portrayed that nicely here. I actually like that it is a bit choppy, it helps set the tone. Nice job!

  • 13 years ago

    by mira

    Woow
    so strong emotion i love it
    the idea isso interesting coz some times we just feel that some thing is missing
    well done

  • 13 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow I love this poem! Actually the meaning and idea reminds me of my latest poem "Something's Missing" of which you've comment on! I love the idea of "nothing" and feeling like nothing... The ending was perfect. Well done

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    I think I agree with bella..a very passion full or emotion full poem..you just need to polish this bit and you will have a master piece.. u do have to will..the imagination and talent shasha..

    amazing piece and if u would like my suggestions..shoot me a pm :)

    but 5/5however

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    I feel you could on your flow a little bit but other than that you have a really good poem here. It was emotional adn really forced the reader to take notice

    5/5

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