I feel you could on your flow a little bit but other than that you have a really good poem here. It was emotional adn really forced the reader to take notice

5/5

I think I agree with bella..a very passion full or emotion full poem..you just need to polish this bit and you will have a master piece.. u do have to will..the imagination and talent shasha..

amazing piece and if u would like my suggestions..shoot me a pm :)

but 5/5however

Wow I love this poem! Actually the meaning and idea reminds me of my latest poem "Something's Missing" of which you've comment on! I love the idea of "nothing" and feeling like nothing... The ending was perfect. Well done

Woow
so strong emotion i love it
the idea isso interesting coz some times we just feel that some thing is missing
well done

I think we all have a moment or two in life where we feel like "nothing". We go to a dark place inside ourselves where we feel like nothing, nothing at all matters and you just feel completely lost. You portrayed that nicely here. I actually like that it is a bit choppy, it helps set the tone. Nice job!