Primal Urges

by Beautiful Chaos   Dec 30, 2010


Stumble over here lover
Tell me of my beauty
Starry eyes, molten lips
Whisper your little lies

Comfort my intuition
Appease my fading heart
Show me your sadistic ways
We were always deviants

You loved that about me
Until it drove you mad
Until you sank to depths,
I was never willing to go

I thought you beat the love out of me
Until I saw you again
My heart must be a masochist
For it began beating once more

My ears waiting to be caressed
By silky words of wanting
As my eyes devour every inch
Of your lustfully built frame

Since the beginning of time
Primal urges have destroyed us
And so willingly we go
Embracing death as a lover

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  • 13 years ago

    by The Princess

    Jenn, this is beautiful. I like the whole idea of how you think that what is said are lies yet want them. even the use of the word ''stumble'' flashed a picture in my head. more of someone hesitating, not sure what will your reaction be dare they come close you again.

    words like ''sadistic'' , ''deviants'' , ''masochist'' and such, made the fight between you and what you want clear and obvious. like he or what you're asking for is what you would love to hate.

    just one suggestion, here..

    ''Since the beginning of time
    Primal urges have destroyed us
    And so willingly we go
    Embracing death as a lover''

    I do not think you need ''as a lover'', you can just end it ''Embracing death'' and it would be more powerful, I guess?

    all in all, I loved this Jenn, well done!

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