My Treasure Island

Through your poem, you have taking my mind to all those island. Just last week i return from the caribbean, and i can tell you that, to be away from home in an island and taste different foods, talk with it's people and simple enjoy it's beauty seems like a paradise. These people no matter what, i notice that their faces wears smiles whenever they meet someone. It's just a joy of living where no time for stress. Well done love it, kel.

Sounds like a lovely place to go to, where the heart will float in happiness..as always your writes are a pleasure to read :)

I hope you win the lottery Randy :)

Thank you for all of your comments!!! This poem indicates my life-long dream to visit the Mediterranean and its wonderous islands. My first choice, if I ever win the lottery would be a month long Mediterranean cruise.

Randy
Once again your magical pen takes the reader on an adventure through your mind. I can invision the moon lighting the waters as your boat goes where it will. Leading you on to beautiful islands in the sea.

To islands far, my spirit's drawn
To Malta, Cyprus, and Capri
The swirling currents lead me on
Toward ancient shores of mystery.

I love the swirling currents taking you where they want. A mystery waiting to be seen

So sail, my schooner, cross the sea
And make our way, Gibraltar-bound
On wayward winds of reverie
My treasure island will be found.

Loved the ending and I know one day you will find your treasure island.
excellent job!
Love Cindy