I could see this pain in my mind. It is like driving a stake through a heart. Great job. Only thing is try to keep your poems nice and organize. Other than that a deep poem

I agree with kmx210 ^^^^ great poem but you might want to clean it up a bit and you have some typos such as - [your] - [you're]

Wow, I've broken a couple guys hearts like this before. I'm not like that anymore though but it sucks when you have to go through it to.

I felt the rhyme was kinda off but other than that it was a good write. Liked it alot. (: 4/5

I enjoyed reading this, I really did. Well, "enjoyed" may not be right word, but I know you know what I mean. Anyways, it has feelings, and thats all a poem needs to be a good one.