Ahhhhhh....poor fishes...watch out for Charlie...he is a slick one :)
Great write Ron
take care
Cindy

That bad ole Charlie the Tuna :-)

A nice story that had a good moral to it as any good story. Always listen to what people tell you. I t can save your hide sometimes or in this case your scales. Anyway the poem had a nice flow to it and I found it to be just a way to relax emotions and get calmness within yourself writing a short little poem.

Overall I found this to be a good children's story that can really teach a lesson to those who can read in between the lines. Great job and keep writing.