by Dreamofolwin Jan 2, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
cyber love
You're my hero, my defender, |
by LoreNz0
Very nicely written. |
by sophia
Beautiful poem... good job! |
by Jad
I found this to be a very beautiful poem describing ones love for someone. I like the message though I would have to say the wording seemed off in certain parts and also the rhyming seemed forced in some parts of the poem. I am not saying this poem wasn't good I am simply just pointing out parts that could be better. In fact I really liked the poem. It reminds me of someone hopelessly falling in love with the same person over and over. |
by Meena Krish
This sounds like a love song one would sing to her loved one..soooo sweet and it gives joy to the heart! Very nice!! |
This is one yummy poem if i must say... :) |