I am sure the person you wrote this for deserves your love and would be flattered to know how you feel about them.

Olwin
it is so nice to have someone to feel this way about.

Yes, you're my hero, my defender,
you're my sunshine in the rain.
And I just can't stop my heart,
from loving you once more again.

No matter how we are feeling we can think of this person we love and it makes everything better. We don't feel so lonely anymore. Our sadness disappears. Everything is replaced with a warm comforting feeling.
Great piece.
Love Cindy

This is one yummy poem if i must say... :)
Great flow of words and emotions. Loved everything abt it.

all the best and take care

This sounds like a love song one would sing to her loved one..soooo sweet and it gives joy to the heart! Very nice!!

I found this to be a very beautiful poem describing ones love for someone. I like the message though I would have to say the wording seemed off in certain parts and also the rhyming seemed forced in some parts of the poem. I am not saying this poem wasn't good I am simply just pointing out parts that could be better. In fact I really liked the poem. It reminds me of someone hopelessly falling in love with the same person over and over.

Overall you did a good job and I liked the many emotions you pour out in this piece. Great job and keep writing.

Beautiful poem... good job!

Very nicely written.