What a great surprise. Its hard to say that you had a writers block for so long. |
Cindy, |
by anand singh
Cindy, welcome back my friend.It's been a long wait for another from you and must say, this is an awesome and beautiful piece. |
by Lu
Glad to see you found your perfect title Cindy. And perfect it is ! |
by Meena Krish
This makes me sigh..no matter how old our kids are, they will always be our baby! Reading this put a smile on my face..heart warming.. |
by Sunshine
Oh gosh you have moved me..I am touched to the extremes. How I wish all mothers and fathers have the ability to hold love for their children the way you do for your son. |
by debbylyn
Very heartfelt and emotional..the last two lines pack a serious punch! I'm sure every mother and father can relate.... |
by Sylvia
Glad you posted this. Tells us a story of your son's growth from baby to man. The love you have for him is evident in this. Good job on your return from writers block. (smiles). The only thing I see is this line needs a comma or the word it removed. |
by Jad
I would have to say that this poem is very heart filled and it makes me wonder what my grandma will think when I grow up. It really brought up old memories of me playing with sticks in the backyard and it was quite enjoyable to say the least. I think it is good to release emotions we fill and you have done that writing away your memories of your son down in such a beautiful poem that really shows the care you have for him. The message of this poem was clear as day light and I believe it was wonderfully depicted. The flow was right on and kept going from line to line as the structure never got off. |
I'm glad you were able to write something, such a beautiful poem for your son. Sounds like a goofy kid back in the day to me hahaha, I know you miss those times. Truly a very nice write though, I'm sure he'll appreciate this very much, he's lucky to have such a wonderful mom like you. |
by The Princess
''So many years have come and gone |
by Lady Nik
This is a really sweet poem. Very glad I stopped to read it. Nik |
by Siglawoo
It made me miss my childhood so much.. it played with my emotions !!! i loved it.... |
by Dreamofolwin
Wonderful Cindy... A most touching and heartfelt piece from your pen that I'm sure will touch many a heart as it has mine, Lolz. |
by Sourav
You made me emotional. Such a wonderful and heartfelt write. Can't stop reading it over and over again! |
by Stephy
Like the poem... |
Time flies when ur having fun. My favorite line, "I can still see his baby face." Beautiful and oh so cute. |
by Rick5191
Good poem. Really good. Made me tear up at the end, no lie haha. |
by Rick5191
Good poem. Really good. Made me tear up at the end, no lie haha. |
by ben thompson
Very nice mom...thanks for writing this.. i miss being a kid. but we'll make it through. i love you very much..... |