A great read through out... Amazing flow. Relationships can often times be like roller coasters. Up and down, up and down, to end in good bye is sad. But to re- flame in forgiveness is glad. I don't know.... That's what this poem got me think'n about.
Another wonderful read... Thx mike.

I reallllllyyy liked this one michael!! Loved the flow! my eyes were just jumping line to line!
When love dies it is a very sad thing...It sucks that one natural thing of life is to experience pain and to know you hurt someone eventually...it happens to the best of us....fallen angels to speak.
I really enjoyed this write/rant!!
Chelsey

I love poems that throw in cupid and angels when it has a feeling of "tragedy" or heart burns.

The lines:
You did not want to be on your own
When you asked me to leave you alone

I've never had a chance to put those feelings/experience into smooth sentences, and it made me smile to see it here. It's so truthful that I was nodding my head when I read them.

The one thing that threw me off was the double "burn" you have at the end of a sentence. It was used twice in different context - but thats just me, I think.

Thank you for sharing.