I really dig the way you show your love for her in this poem. How it starts out sweet and fun. The middle is filled with wonderful rhyme and imagery.. But most of all how all of it burstes into an epic array of ribbons everywhere. Like plugging this poem into a giant amplifier and exploding it's meaning 10 fold. Wonder piece 5/5

Ohh I love this one...it's so sweet. I can see how much you love her
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5/5