On the floor

by Rick5191   Jan 6, 2011


I used to lay here in pain.
Brought by love.

But time passes.

And now I lay here again,
Riddled with the same pain.

Just hopeless this time.
Dark.
This is Emptiness.

Not to be melodramatic or anything :P

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  • 13 years ago

    by ibelievedhim

    This is exactly how i feel everyday :/ you wrote this so well. good job xx katie

  • 13 years ago

    by Tyler

    You get a 4.5 for the poem, and an extra .5 for that sobering comment shortly after that made me laugh till a coughed my lungs out :|

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