Blood of My Pen

This is amazing, this is fabulously written ..one of the most remarkable poems by you, and worded in the most perfect way.
A coherent piece with original feelings, yet those that many can relate to.--I as one.

I so love the feeling of being imperfect that you expressed at the end of 1st stanza, then made a connection to it by your ending line in the last stanza..
this is mastered.

Black blood-
written words from my heart
or tears spilled or possibly
a release from my captivation
of being so imperfect.
^^^
okat 1st stanza, black blood was not a really powerful opening for your stanza but that really doesn't matter for me because the stanza it self was very strong, and well structured. Sad however, yes sad I really think the release from your captivation of being imperfect IS PERFECT..I so so lovve this..!!

Unraveling emotions,
these words
transfix on perfection,

^^fanatastic, I so love the
condradicted impression that wavers
between these 2 lines and the lines before it..

linger on fallacy, seeping
into untold amount of verses.
^^^wow this is fantastic..very creative austin, the wording is incredible and I love the power of your words here..
brilliaaaaanttttt

Finally a drip sustains
^^i think it's very smart to say a drip..rather than specifying again..a drip of what.
amazing job..Catchy

an ending to my insanity
written mindlessly;
adequate but lacking
everything I've become.
^^^this was very strong, and it left a very huge impact..i feel the loss of your thoughts..and the knowledge of them . Both at the same time, I think you played this poem so well..like all your poetry..
amazing austin..amazingggggggg

5/5

What a technique you have for writing . I enjoyed this poem, it speaks to me in ways I won't try to explain. What a great theme and your wording is absolutely brilliant

Austin
Very deep feelings come from your words in this piece. So many feelings can be released from the pen
Great job!

I like the title as well as the depth of this write. I feel a deeper emotion with each stanza..a heart tugging write..take care.

..raw and real and effective..
.......I can Feel it........