Nice work on this. Our existence is bewildering at times and comparing it to a fractal is original. Looked up the definition of fractal, a rough or fragmented geometric shape that can be split into parts, each of which is (at least approximately) a reduced-size copy of the whole, a property called self-similarity. So not only did I read a good poem today, I learned something new. Well done.

My pleasure Sylvia.... Fractals are really cool.
when you look it up again... look up pictures too!

Randy

What a Fantastic write! Love the rhyme and rhythm in your poem... and I too have just learnt something new today :) Thankuu Randy for an amazing poem :)

I really liked your poem. was well written

Very interesing poem. quite evocative and well done. good!

I like your use of words its very well put together :)

I liked it :)

I liked it, it was short your flow was great. You must really like science huh?xD

I must agree: the comparison is original. Also the rhymes flowed really well. A powerful piece for something short. Well done :)
-X

This was amazing. Your choice of words is very unique.