Here I Stand

by Kelwin lost in thought   Jan 9, 2011


Here i stand
all alone in the dark
fighting the fight
not knowing wrong from right
fighting the demons inside of me

here take my hand
take a stand here beside me
you are not alone
this is our final stand
the time is ours

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  • 13 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Hun I thought this poem was okay. Nothing about it really stood out to me. I think you used a lot of old and worn out lines. I'd love to see a more creative piece from you. The emotional content was strong. I could tell yuo were hurting and wanted this other person to help you get better. Keep working at it. -Nik

  • 13 years ago

    by Cupids Got A Gun

    Very good, almost inspirational!

  • 13 years ago

    by Alyx

    I agree with Soft Parade.

    Bravo.

  • 13 years ago

    by Soft Parade

    Two sdies of the one person? That is the impression I was left with, but that is the sign of a good poem - many interpetations depending on the readers mood and understanding.

    Well done.

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