Why!

by Kelwin lost in thought   Jan 9, 2011


Why do people have to lie?
and why also do they have to hide?
are they afraid of this place?
or do they just hate my face?
why do people have to put them-selfs down?
why is there no one around?
are people just afraid of the light?
or are they so tiered of being taken so lightly?

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  • 13 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Probably the best written poem of yours, it has a nice flow and the exclamation mark in the tittle catches the eye. It uses rhetorical questions and that always helps feelings get across. One point here is that rules can be broken in poems, you don't have to use full sentences. Try singing it out, that might help you find a rhythm and give it more flow.

  • 13 years ago

    by Miss Lonely Teacher

    Really good, unfortunatly i don't think anyone could fully answer. i enjoyed it

  • 13 years ago

    by Eef

    I like it :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Soft Parade

    This poem has more of a rhetorical bitterness which i enjoyed, people are fickle and you have observed this well with this piece.

  • 13 years ago

    by Soft Parade

    This poem has more of a rhetorical bitterness which i enjoyed, people are fickle and you have observed this well with this piece.

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