This poem has more of a rhetorical bitterness which i enjoyed, people are fickle and you have observed this well with this piece.

This poem has more of a rhetorical bitterness which i enjoyed, people are fickle and you have observed this well with this piece.

I like it :)

Really good, unfortunatly i don't think anyone could fully answer. i enjoyed it

Probably the best written poem of yours, it has a nice flow and the exclamation mark in the tittle catches the eye. It uses rhetorical questions and that always helps feelings get across. One point here is that rules can be broken in poems, you don't have to use full sentences. Try singing it out, that might help you find a rhythm and give it more flow.