Comments : Journey Afterlife

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    An excellent poem and in my opinion it had no faults. I managed to read this poem fairly quickly as it all just went together so well.

    The only thing I would change is the title as I feel a better one could have been picked

    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Aure

    A great poem. People say a picture says more than a thousand words. However no picture could capture what you did here.