It was an awesome poem. The words carried the emotions effectively :)

I found this poem to be a deeply emotional piece. It was easey to read and flowed really well. I liked this last but one stanza alot but over all the poem was excellent

5/5

You have a vivid imagination. I think you could write some good Retourne styles of poems. No matter how you repeat a line, you find your way out meaningfully. Love it, kel.

Great work. I can't say how many times I told people flow and structure is almost equally important as content while writing. And you've got both. Great words, great flow, great everything!

Nice poem! Such great emotions are definitly felt when u read it!!!