Homesick

by shadow   Jan 10, 2011


This place is dark, unwelcoming and cold
Full of loud noises and polluted smells
Crowded buses and busy streets
A strange kind of man-made hell

Concrete desert of strange faces
Staring eyes that silently cry for more
Forced for whatever reason
To endure the pain of this growing sore

It was not my choice to move away
Not my fault this was the only way to go
If I could choose, I'd go back in an instant
To the familiar places and people I know

500,000 people but am I the only one?

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  • 13 years ago

    by lovemehateme

    It was not my choice to move away
    Not my fault this was the only way to go
    If I could choose, I'd go back in an instant
    To the familiar places and people I know

    . .loved this stanza. Felt like I could connect with it. Anyways, liked the poem to though. Very well written. Keep it up.(: 5/5

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