Comments : Homesick

  • 13 years ago

    by lovemehateme

    It was not my choice to move away
    Not my fault this was the only way to go
    If I could choose, I'd go back in an instant
    To the familiar places and people I know

    . .loved this stanza. Felt like I could connect with it. Anyways, liked the poem to though. Very well written. Keep it up.(: 5/5