I have mixed feelings about this poem as on one hand I felt the poem could have had a better flow but on the other hand I liked what was there and felt the flow didn't matter so much.

The stanza I liked the least was the second stanza as I felt the whole thing could have been worded better but that said I loved the power in the the stanza that followed:

"A psycho pervert
Stabbing hearts that wasn't theirs
The soul it reaps,
rips and tears"

Excellently put!

4/5