I love this poem! i love the word choice (As usual) and I reallly loveeeeee
LOVe the way you had this amazing easy flow..
just few suggestions which u can ignore as you know:P
A wild wind blew,
^^I suggest you to take
off the A..plus add a semicolon rather than a comma like.. better for the flow..as I read it.
Wild wind blew;
it caught me
with its many hands,
and dared my skirt to twirl
(read and compare..if you think i am senseless then fine :P haha)
and I, so easily captivated
^^ better to take off the and..
already used it 2 times after this one
and taking this one off is the best option
cause they all fit :/ and are not really replaceable like this one
by spry air
gave way to possibility,
^^gave way to possib...how
well thought of! you manage your thoughts
so perfectly !!
and became a single petal
lost to your whirl-
^^^this was aamazinggg..I love the harmony I find in the strong connection between your line and words...
makes the poem very strong and hits home well..even if we can't really relate.
a strange flower,
flitting about recklessly
in some violent gust
^^^althought I felt violent gust
was unneeded since it kind of
reword wild wind..but damn that was such
a usage..colorful poetry!
what a mess you've made
of my trust
^^^
in no way did I expect you to end your poem by that !! trust..yay..i was like seeking something about confidence at 1st and the ending was rather shocking and that's something reallly amazing..